Sunday, November 15, 2015

Dream Inspired Poetry



The hug I remember crystal clear 

The way those blue eyes held me steady

The way I held him and he accepted my comforting 
The way he didn't let go
and
The way I didn't want him to feel pain

Laying down we held each other in our eyes
Never looking away
Gazing into the eyes of each other was more than physical contact could ever be

Blue eyes peeking into my soul
Brown eyes peering back to his 

Eyes holding me steady as I am acting as the stronger person

Even if I know I will crumble into pieces when he's gone... 

<3,
Vanessa

14 comments:

  1. Beautiful ♥ So relaxing ♥ So talented ♥

    Hi Vanessa! I'm hosting a really exciting competition called NerdBuZZ and would love for you to check it out, and maybe join?

    Thanks!

    ~ Rukiya

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    1. I'd love to but unfortunately I am crammed with school work. Thank you for stopping by!

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  2. Wow this Poetry is so wonderfull.
    Love, Lea

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    1. Thank you! First time I've written something like this :)

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  3. #ajdhsjadjksdha
    this was so goooood, girl <3<3

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    1. Thank youuu! <3 I didnt know I had it in me to write like this

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  4. Beautiful! Just beautiful!! ♥ I loved reading every word!

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  5. This blew me away, you're so amazingly talented oh my :O

    ~Noor

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  6. This is really and truly beautiful <3

    Noire Beau

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